Sunday, 10 September 2017

Writing Prove it 37

L.I Can I use personal voice to add effect?

"Where are all the birds?'' I asked myself. So far on this walk I've only seen 1 Falcon and that's it. Awhina talked to us about all the plants, trees and what their purpose is. When we learnt about Rangiora I saw all the birds flying up in the sky. I was feeling a little panicked, I thought there was a earthquake or a cyclone or a Hurricane, I thought it was the last day for me. Soon I just realised that it was the loud noise that we were making. After the tour we drank some tea out of Kawakawa leaves. It was yum, we left Gordon's Bush and headed back to school.

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